top of page
  • Instagram
  • TikTok

Secrets in the Shallows-Chapter Four

  • Writer: Savannah Wagner
    Savannah Wagner
  • Sep 24, 2024
  • 4 min read

Chapter Four



After we went swimming, Zack followed Hanna and me to our cabin. He claimed he couldn’t sleep, but I think he is genuinely scared of seeing Alaina’s ghost. 

I am sure it is past the curfew, but everything about the camp at night makes the legend more eerie. Zack rests his head on the couch. His feet are dangling over the edge. 

“Did you really see your dead cousin?” He asks, his eyes closed like he is in deep thought.

I am lying on the ground below him. Hanna is sitting by my feet. I yawn, unaware of what time it is, “I don’t know what is real anymore. But I think so.” I admit to him. 

“I’m scared I will see her,” Zack says, his voice fading. It’s time for him to leave. 

“She’s not scary,” I say. I can say that with confidence now. Alaina is not scary, but she is sad. She is a sad soul, looking for someone to save her. She is just like any of us. 

Zack raises up, finally. I flinch, the sudden movement scaring me. “I need to leave,” He says, his voice groggy. 

“Goodnight,” I say, relieved to get the rest. Tomorrow was opening day, and I was dreading it already. 

“See you on opening day,” He says, barely getting to the door. 

“Go to bed, Zack,” Hanna motions, rubbing her temple. He leaves, but only because I force him out the door. 

“We need to get some rest so we can do our research,” Hanna says. I look over at her, putting my finger to my mouth as a way to tell her to be quiet. Amelia is in her bed already. Her chest moves up and down as she breathes in her sleep. 

“She’s out of it,” She blows me off. Although, I am worried that Amelia is pretending so she can eavesdrop. 

“You don’t know that for sure,” I say, lowering my voice. 

Hanna steps closer to Amelia’s sleeping body, “Oh yeah, she’s already drooling.”

“Okay, quit! Go to sleep. I’ll wake up in a couple of hours.” I say, getting into the bed and turning on my side so my back is facing her.

Hours later, I am still tossing beneath the covers. Every time I close my eyes, I see Alaina standing at the dock.  I am unaware of the time until I finally check my phone on the nightstand. It is two o’clock in the morning. I look over at Hanna, who is snoring quietly as she exhales. 

I rise out of bed, the floor creaking as my feet touch the cold wooden panels. I stop, looking over at Amelia. She’s still sleeping soundly, so I keep moving once more. 

I go over to Hanna’s bed and start nudging her lightly. 

“Hanna?” I whisper, “Are you ready?” 

Hanna’s body jolts, “Huh?” 

“Are you ready to go?” I ask. 

“What time is it?” She raises up a little, her voice still tired. Her blonde curls are falling out of her low bun. 

“Two,” I say.

“Two in the morning? Are you sure this is what you want to do?” She asks me. 

“This was your idea!” I say, raising my voice while trying to maintain a whisper.  

She huffs, getting out of bed. Hanna is dressed in shorts and a long shirt that goes down to her knees. She takes a pair of slippers and quickly puts them on. 

“Is Zack coming?” She asks as we head for the door. 

“Zack doesn’t even know about this,” I tell her, feeling a sting of guilt that I left him out of our little adventure. 

“Do you think he should?” She asks. 

I wait to answer her as I close the door behind us, “I will have to tell him eventually, but it’s not like we’re doing anything top secret,” I say, trying not to laugh at what I just said. 

“If it’s not top secret then we could tell him,” She says, not understanding why I am being so secretive with Alaina. “Why are you being so weird about Alaina again?” 


I pause, thinking about my answer, “I guess I just want to get it right. And it’s my family. I don’t like people making weird theories about it.” 

“Is that why you chose the article?” Hanna asks, “To set the record straight?” 

I look over at her, the moon shining on her face, “Yeah, I guess you could say that.” 

Through the dark we go, the only light we have is the moon and the flashlight on our phones trying its best to guide us. The admissions cabin is on the other side of the campground. As we pass by Heidi’s cabin, I worry that somehow she’ll notice us out. I don’t know how I can explain trying to get in the admissions cabin at two in the morning, but I need to think of a lie just in case. However, nothing really makes sense. So, I just hope and pray that I don’t have to cross that bridge. 

When we get to the cabin, I try to open the door but it is locked. Panic swells inside of me as I search for an alternative entrance. All I can think about is the countless times on TV shows where they pick locks. 

“Hanna, do you have a bobby pin?” I ask, leaning down on the ground to attempt something I have never even done before.

“Yeah,” She pulls it out of her hair, “What are you doing with it?” 

I start to bend it back, thinking back to those mystery shows I’ve seen. I know I am probably doing this wrong. The humidity from my hands is making it almost impossible to keep a steady hand. 

“Do you even know what you’re doing?” Hanna stands above me as I twist the lock until I accidentally drop one of the bobby pins. 

“Not really,” I sigh, frustration starting to take over me. 

“Let me try,” Her knees go to the ground and she starts twisting. Then, she dropped the bobby pin like I did. Except this time, one of them drops through the cracks on the porch. 

“Are you kidding me?” I knew something like this would happen. I thought maybe finding out how to contact any family member would help me, but I feel as if all hopes are lost. 

I’m about to just go back to bed until, out of nowhere, I hear a voice behind us say, “I can do it.”







 
 
 

Recent Posts

See All
The Beauty of the New

We were kids and that's the beauty of it. Too timid. Nothing ever made sense. Not ready for anything. Too young to make future plans....

 
 
 
Secrets in the Shallows-Chapter Three

Chapter Three After dinner, Lawrence built a fire for us outside. I didn’t mention the legend to Phineas again. Even though the legend in...

 
 
 

Comments


bottom of page